One Deep Breath-Short and Sweet

suckling honeybee hangs on for dear life
indulging life’s sweetest passion, creating nectar
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13 thoughts on “One Deep Breath-Short and Sweet

  1. What? Two of the best one-liner haikus I’ve read this week and I’m the first to comment?
    Ok. So it’s a little late. But hopefully the rest will check back and see what they’ve been missing.
    I especially liked the second one (although they do make a complete statement together). Ah, to create the nectar of life, sort of what it’s all about, no? (Kind of like the sexy Crayfish)
    Very nice

  2. Becca, your first one is so different in feel from your second one, which is so poetic, but they both create a strong visual for me.

  3. oooo la la…i especially like the “passion” and what you said without saying it…
    (or maybe you weren’t saying it and i was just thinking it but, hey, that’s the beauty of open interpretation 😉

  4. These are truly little one-line gems. I’m so glad to see you keeping up with your writing in spite of your busy-ness.

  5. These are lovely – I’d never heard of the one-liners before, but you’ve nailed it. Also like the bright and cheery photo; lately I am mad about yellow!

  6. Wonderful haiku and photo.
    You have heard that the honey bees are dying mysteriously..a great concern for us all!What would nature do without our sweet bees!

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